I kind of liked the writing style, though sometimes it slightly annoyed me, that the sentences were short and simple.
And though we knew her best friend was a she once, but now is a male. It still confused me sometimes when she switched between she and he or her and his.
I don’t like the ending that much, I was so happy that things were done, only to be screwed over again. :\ This means -1 star.
Also the last part seemed quite hurried, like, we have to make an ending (any ending apparently was good enough) and lets do that quickly. also -1 star.